Ah, an obnoxious student, very fun. My brain hurts with that fifth paragraph! I feel the ending is a little anti-climatic, mildly amusing but it just cuts off very suddenly with is a little jarring to read.
Your mind-bending descriptions are easy to read, they flow well. One minor point is we do travel in the fourth dimension, just not like we travel through space. People are still fascinatedly researching exactly how it works but without time we’d be completely static, there’d be no life as there’d be no time to live it in.
Lighty