You have a little punctuation problem between wives and devout. And also ‘lol’-ing at the ‘unpleasant’. Cleves was downright ugly. It’s really sombre which doesn’t particularly reflect the nature of the King. Also, Henry wouldn’t be praying for Edward, he’d be confident in his son’s ability. However I understand how his demeanour may change. He is, obviously, dying. I love the premise of the piece but it has its flaws. Still I’m interested to see how you interpret the wives.
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))