I’m liking the reversals, juxtaposition, whatever you’d like to call them.

I’m liking this. Very fun nonsense and it still manages to feel like it has backstory, my only point would be I wish there was more of it, I wanna know about this narrator!
Also “Homeless in a house that’s decked out fancy” is a superb line.

Tad, I honestly think you are consistently brilliant enough to be christened Ficly’s Resident Poet…

This was tantalisingly topsy-turvy! MH :)

Wow, I would be honored MH! Even if this position doesn’t even exist I’m honored to recieve such high praise from you. Thanks:D