Interesting that he was able to get things past the cops. A few little mishaps in the storyline. Possibly need to read the story out loud to pick up what I mean. Good plot though.

thanks for the suggestions! it’s part of some character sketches I am working on. I have been playing with tense a lot recently. I’ve gotten feedback of the the years I tend to write in the past tense. Anyway, I’ll keep playing with what I can fit in in 1024 :) thanks!