Man, I really like this. Genuinely love it. Not quite sure why, but it just appeals to my love of fantasy hunters.

I wasn’t sure how many feet he had, ‘tall’ doesn’t imply two, he could be tall for a crocodile for all I know.. :)
I hope you sequel because I hate when people end on an ellipses! It’s not really a cliffhanger to know what the interior looked liked, but rather what it may contain.
You have some incredible details in here, like the eyes, however paragraphs would have made this a bit easier to read. For instance, a break right before “slowly” would be awesome.
Keep writing and giving us great fantasy characters like this!

Thankoodle.
I will think up a sequel at some point.

I read this thinking of a tall purple elfen thing with glowing yellow eyes. It really sparked my fantasy love. I love the intricacy and detail you have managed to fit into 1024 characters. That’s amazing in itself.
This box reminds me a lot of the TARDIS from Doctor Who. Automatically when the interior was introduced I thought of something larger on the inside than out.
In the second sentence, the semi-colon turns the second part into a grammatical error in itself. You should replace it with ‘and’ or ‘with’. That stunted my reading a little.
I can’t wait to read more from this series!
(Also was it intentional to rate your own piece 5/5?)
And, hi, I’m Nadya but you can call me PJ :)

No, it wasn’t intentional…