maybe, til death do YOU part, for consistency.
I see you took the possessive route, like toddlers who cannot share their toys, the downfall of divorce is dividing them up.

:)
I only put ‘us’ because I imagine it as one of the couple speaking, which would make it us. It would be easier to put across who is speaking if it was in another language I suppose because in English there’s no difference between singular ‘you’ and plural ’you’…
But I like your divorce interpretation

lol! and I get that you changed perspectives, just thought consistency might be an option. It still works.

Ohh ok. In which case, I hope I wasn’t too patronising :)