Holy run-on sentences Batman! The tone is so impersonal that what should be a touching vignette just feels cheap. The whole “kids miss dad because he went off to war” thing has to be done very carefully in order to come across as genuine.
Holy run-on sentences Batman!
The tone is so impersonal that what should be a touching vignette just feels cheap. The whole “kids miss dad because he went off to war” thing has to be done very carefully in order to come across as genuine.
J.M.V.