You have a dark and twisted mind, ElshaHawk. I like it!

i think it explains a lot….

Oh.
My.
Lord Jesus Christ.

Bizarre, allegorical, metaphysical, and/or metaphorical. Great visuals and themes, even if I disagree.

Therapy does so work. So there.

hee hee. I’ve never had therapy, it just fit the story. :)

I love the way you have described the soul as having a symbiotic relationship with the body.
I may extrapolate on this in a ficly when I return from holidays.

;)

This story just would not leave me alone. I kept coming back to it and finally just had to give in and sequel it. Hopefully, it does justice to the original. :)

For me, the last line elevates this from cool to marvelous.

Dark and very twisted. Just my cup of tea.

I love the first line, especially the phrase “melt into a dark primordial ooze.” As a total science nerd, I really, really enjoy how this reads like a “Life of the (insert organism)”-esque article with a dark, philosophical twist.