OMG, BON IVER!!!

Uh, anyway. This is intriguing; I feel like it could be the start to a great series, and I’ll definitely read on if you continue. Paragraph separation would be nice on a visual level, but otherwise, good job!

Thank you! How do you make indentation more visible? Everytime I put spaces or whatever for a new paragraph, it takes them out when I publish it.

That’s strange— have you tried doing return/enter just once? Maybe that’ll work…

Feels like it has some good themes in it, though I struggled to get past the formatting. It’s mostly cause it’s late, and my eyes are tired, but in general it helps to put some spacing in there. Hope you are able to work out the technicality to do that, hope you keep writing!

Tab doesn’t work, neither does the spacebar. When I press enter twice, it takes out the space when I publish it. I’ll keep working on it though. Thanks for the comments!

This is really great! I like the internalization, as I can really feel the dilemma.