I prefer this to the prequel, even though I thoroughly enjoyed that one. There is a much darker tone here, which is generally something I enjoy.

Great dialog and descriptors. “I shot back as fast as eighty proof would let me,” is a fantastic line.

One nit-pick is that third-to-last sentence there. It either needs a comma, or to be re-worded. I’d go with “Apparently, when under the influence, I’m as cocky as my friend is dramatic.”

Haha, I liked this =] Its a very entertaining story, and you definitely reinforced the “I’m no angel” bit, from the prequel.

I could visually see the drunken stances.
Made me giddy.(or perhaps I have seen it too much)

Thanks for the editing help, John Perkins. Changes made.