Oooo, an evil scheme to trap souls! Nice continuation, I like! What could be the nefarious plans for the souls? Or could it simply be an alien form, a feeder on souls? Or is the capture of this one, and the previous others, for the betterment of humanity? All rhetorical questions, all juicy, and tasty.

Nice continuation!

Oh, the pure art of seduction . This should have been rated as ‘mature’,August. Well done

A twist as nicely conceived as ElshaHawk’s. Lovely!

I disagree, Marli, on the mature rating. I think this one’s fine without. :)