Not exactly a quick read. It has a good rhythm and I think it ends well. For all of its complexity I find it vague with meaning— which is just how poetry is sometimes.

Cheers Tad, to be honest the rhythm here put me in mind of a somewhat harried and forgetful dance partner. It’s just about paying the price for poor choices, out and out poetry is not my medium of choice but the quick quick slow is lulling me into not over thinking what I’m doing, tangents are my speciality and normally I’d still be uncobbling about now…