I would rather comment than to leave the darkness unchallenged.

This describes exactly how I feel about this piece! The first two sentences need to be combined, as the first is a fragment all alone, and you misspelled ‘of’, I think, at the beginning.
What I picture is an obviously intelligent person holding a drawing made by a 3 yr old and asked if they like it. :) Not wanting to lie, nor break their little heart, they are tongue tied.

Not so deep and a lot dafter than that Elsha, it was a slightly cracked exercise in unrepetitive repetitiveness, it=object, off course=skewed. Never mind, I’ll get me coat :)