The psychologist in me appreciates this little line of thought, but as a story narrative it’s a bit dry. You might try to find a way to rewrite it with your character being a more active participant in these ponderings.

Thanks. I had a bit of trouble with this one. Would have loved to expanded upon it, especially in the direction you recommended.

craziness, and easy to skim because of the idea that dreams and memories are so similar, blah blah.. The ending is ironically humorous. Maybe though, you could have hinted at the action that happened ‘two days ago’. That would really hook the reader.