I’m impressed, for what it’s worth…

I like it! But then again, I’ve always been a sucker for original mythologies.

Thanks! Appreciate it.

i don’t think opossums are cavernous.. scavenge is what they do, it bothers me to use it as a noun.. but the ending is absolutely supreme! You need a few commas, but what’s a few commas when you have a line like ‘searching for what it had already found’. :)

nice descriptive work :)

Great piece of fantasy fiction and good descriptions—like the idea of a lost Titan.

(Shouldn’t “its” be capitalized if “It” is?)

Nah, ‘It’ is its name. So when its capitalised I’m using its name. haha.