This is a slightly edited reply I posted to one of my friends notes on facebook. I thought it fit rather well for this challenge.

An inspiring speech that really speaks to me. I like it.

But personally speaking, I think the use of ‘big’ words like ‘’contraction’, alleviation’ and ‘semblences’ (actually, that’s all of them) kinda makes the speech clunky and reduces the effect. For me, it seems like something a person would say to a close friend; using so many ‘big’ words makes it seem less… close. But maybe that’s just me. :)

Haha, you may be right, but that’s actually how I talk in real life. I like words, and intend to use them if they’re available to me.