Comments on Of a Boy and a Girl [poem] by Ana Cristina

One Time, One Chance

You write incredibly.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Ana Cristina

Thank you, OTOC!
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- Posted over 10 years ago.
shewhodares

this is so poignant and sweet and I love the tactile imagery of the last few lines.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Music-Hearted

This is so beautiful. <3
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
wytherwings

this is just… beautiful
you definitely have a lovely way with words
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
g²LaPianistaIrlandesa

I have seen greatness and it is awesome.
There’s this indescribable tenderness and an almost-celestial beauty to this, it’s absolutely gorgeous.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
crescentdreams

Very lovely.. I like how you give us more than one sense.. and for some reason, the last paragraph reminds me of Cupid & Psyche. Thanks for posting!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Mr. Reeses

This is absolutely amazing and one of my favorites! Well done. This poem is realistic, full of imagery, amazing and just pure ….I’m speechless.
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Brebelles {LoA}

GOrgeous! Love this. I love your poems!!
- Posted over 10 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Mighty-Joe Young (A.K.A Strong Coffee)(LoA)

this is so surreal.it doesnt remind me of anything it is just fresh like hearing a new tale that you cant predict exept you were in it. i love this one
- Posted over 10 years ago.