You write incredibly.
Thank you, OTOC! blushes
this is so poignant and sweet and I love the tactile imagery of the last few lines.
This is so beautiful. <3
this is just… beautiful you definitely have a lovely way with words
I have seen greatness and it is awesome. There’s this indescribable tenderness and an almost-celestial beauty to this, it’s absolutely gorgeous.
Very lovely.. I like how you give us more than one sense.. and for some reason, the last paragraph reminds me of Cupid & Psyche. Thanks for posting!
This is absolutely amazing and one of my favorites! Well done. This poem is realistic, full of imagery, amazing and just pure ….I’m speechless.
GOrgeous! Love this. I love your poems!!
this is so surreal.it doesnt remind me of anything it is just fresh like hearing a new tale that you cant predict exept you were in it. i love this one
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