Very nice. Always love the potential for strong female characters.
You know me. It’s just more fun that way ;)
Very nice. :) I’d recommend adding an additional carriage return between paragraphs, however. It helps the visual flow and keeps everything from crowding up.
Very nice. :)
I’d recommend adding an additional carriage return between paragraphs, however. It helps the visual flow and keeps everything from crowding up.
Yeah, it looks better that way. Thanks.
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