Oof

It’s powerful

The second line in the first paragraph is really awkward and redundant. Otherwise not too shabby. Sad ending, but nothing wrong with that at all from my perspective.

Dang, that’s creepy.

Wow. Would it be weird if I said “voyeurism at it’s finest”? Nicely done.

Effective dark story—not that that’s a bad thing.

A very good read. I could see all of it actually happen as I read it.

Liked it, obviously. I think it’s because, sadly enough, I can relate to the experience of having paper-thin walls and hearing EVERYTHING.

I liked the line “Samuel was the live audience of their unaware sitcom.” I could imagine what it was like. Well done.

Oh man! Is it weird that I love little set-up conflicts like this? Because I kinda do…

The ending, at least for me, was quite powerful. Real nice!

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 900 STARS

Kind of reminds me of when my cousins lived in an apartment and could hear their neighbors having sex. The neighbors girlfriend always wondered why my cousins called her “Mona” when her name was Rebecca =D