I like how you incorporated her backstory into the main body of the story. And the reference to the “Wild Geese” was very nice. Possibly one of my favourite poems. The last line is a nice touch and rounds out the story. Thanks Robert.
I like how you incorporated her backstory into the main body of the story. And the reference to the “Wild Geese” was very nice. Possibly one of my favourite poems.
The last line is a nice touch and rounds out the story.
Thanks Robert.
thelostgirl