Oh I like this. It leaves an uncertainty with the reader even after the last line. Is Emily really haunting him or is she just a projection of his tortured mind? And did he let her die or does he blame himself? Leaving questions unanswered is what makes this story enjoyable.

Thanks Adrianna.

Thanks! I’ve never deliberately written a scene that leaves so many unanswered questions for the reader (bad writing doesn’t count!), so I was a bit nervous at first.