Hahaha nice sequel. They’re all coming back!
You killed my father! Excellent writing. Except ‘teeming masses of tasty humanity’ stumbles some what. I think you can trim off the fat some.
You killed my father!
Excellent writing. Except ‘teeming masses of tasty humanity’ stumbles some what. I think you can trim off the fat some.
It took me a second to realize who the zombie was. I wonder if that was one of his paintings.
It took me a second to realize who the zombie was.
I wonder if that was one of his paintings.
Hahaha
haha
I think all of your work tends to be a bit too wordy, but the zombie Hitler is a good payoff.