Ouch. Good story.

Oh I love it! I would really like to know what the scars are from… war?

Great word choices!

Wow. This creates a powerful sense of the true feelings that can be lurking inside.

The ambiguity leaves the reader wanting more. This is a well-crafted scene. Bravo.

This piece is really intriguing; like John Perkins said, the ambiguity is great; it allows the reader to color it with their own experiences.

Phonetically brilliant in spots. Enjoyable story all together. Nice one!