Way to step it up. I never considered telling it from the other guy’s perspective. I might have to answer your upping of the ante and tell the tale of woe from the narrator’s perspective. Thanks for my first sequel!
No insult, not in the least. You did fuel some further writing though. I feel that the other man’s tale has been defined by you so I’ve paralleled your sequel with own of my own told by the narrator. I must admit that I am curious about the homecoming for man #2 (I call him Tim in my mind, a name that was lost meeting the 1024 requirement) and how his family/friends received his story if it was told at all. I guess it’s your turn for some gut wrenching theatrics. Go forth!
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