What I expect a comment on a 3 star rated story sounds like

In my mind,
If we rewind,
To the point in time,
Where you realise,
In your eyes,
There’s a gap in ficly,
For a story like yours,
And you started to write,
Before taking a pause.
And then writing mediocrity,
It’s in this story, eh?
When I read it I felt just one word.


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