Ooh.. I feel bad about rating this story, because it’s not terrible. It’s just pretty apalling. I think it might be pointless to give constructive criticism, it’s just that bad, but there are… some… good things about it.

Haha, nice sentiment in practical terms set to verse. I like the funny combination of utility and poetry.

I sympathize with H.S. Wift. How do you rate a good story (poem) about a low rating for a bad story?