I think it is great. Nice emotion.
very kewl way of putting the struggle to get over a loose of someone but always looking back and wishing they never left i really like this one
wowww i rly rly like this one sis. awesome metaphor there, you’re one hell of a poet =)
awe thanks everyone. you’re making me blush with your sweet words =)
featured! a few spelling errors, but the poetry is wonderful. :)
first ever on here =D i’m really bad at spelling
A wonderful metaphor for a person’s transition from grief to acceptance, with some very good emotion thrown in as well. Very well done; it deserved to be featured.
Love the imagery and themes here =] great job! I really like the end.