I definitely enjoy this, although I felt the use of “delicate” twice so close to each other was a bit jarring. But all in all I thought it was very well described you definitely showed the scene visually instead of telling us what happened.

Oof! Thanks for pointing that out. I think I have to sneak in and magic it away… Shh, don’t tell anyone!

Wow. Beautiful and creepy and mysterious.

Neat!

I’d like a sequel for this. Very smooth prose.

So I just came here after reading A Long Drop. Both are great – hella broad range. Most impressive.

Beautifully told with a little hints of bizarre. I have no idea what’s going on, but that’s okay.

I don’t think I get it. I don’t know what’s going on, which is fine, but I can’t quite catch the feel, either.

I think maybe it isn’t for me.

This is intriguing…it definitely draws me in, both the language and the impression of the world. My main complaint has to do with feeling like I need a little more to really get it.

Hey, look…a sequel.