Thank you :) Hubby reckons I should do 64 Ficlies on this. I’ll try, but I have to take a break every now and then (we’re moving house etc.).
Thank you :)
Hubby reckons I should do 64 Ficlies on this. I’ll try, but I have to take a break every now and then (we’re moving house etc.).
Someday, I’ll travel the world and be able to write tales like this one. Well done!
My one gripe is this sentence: “As I descended the vegetation grew lusher, as if walking into a jungle.” As it’s constructed, it sounds like the vegetation is walking into the jungle. Other than that, I can only echo what Kevin Dolley said. Well done!
My one gripe is this sentence: “As I descended the vegetation grew lusher, as if walking into a jungle.”
As it’s constructed, it sounds like the vegetation is walking into the jungle.
Other than that, I can only echo what Kevin Dolley said. Well done!
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