Speedo amarillo-naranja?

Interesting premise but needs some tuning. Lots of redundancy. even/anyway never/any etc. Good start, though

The title and the opening lines intrigued me but it didn’t really go anywhere. He just seems sad.

Tweaked some language per comments

(: The title and first line are definitely intriguing. It’s kind of a sad story though and as Paige said, doesn’t really go anywhere. The title would have you hoping for a bit more something entertaining. Thanks for participating!