It took me one line to know which song you were talking about. I love me some Ben Folds! (gonna go read the rest now)

Capturing ‘Brick’ from her perspective was just begging to be done. You made good use of the song’s lines in places and created a narrative that gets into her mind. The flowers/funeral line was my favorite. Well done.

Thanks!
I like me some different POVs :)

I like the like a funeral part…
This brief story really captivated the length of the opression felt after the abortion.

I REALLY liked this!
It was real short, but just long enough to really get the point across. This was really well written and the perspectives of the story was very descriptive! This was such an emotional piece as well. We really got inside her head!
Good job and Congratulations! (: