Mostly Harmless

For me, this works as a nostalgically sensual example of how locations can last for a lifetime – even when you can’t remember a place’s name, so often the feelings, the colours, the atmosphere in the air still remain…

Your descriptions are wonderfully abstract, and all I wish is that your structure – ‘in the spring’, ‘in the summer’ etc. – matched it a little more rather than being so linear.

Still, this was well-written and nicely evocative – MH :)

• Posted almost 9 years ago.
• 3 out of 5