Neat idea. It really does make one wonder what a mind would do with a long-held desire that turned out to be not only impossible but pointless.

Whoa, this is great. It starts off with a bang; the character’s rage is palpable. Like THX said, the letdown must be something indeed… nice work!

I can actually see this one in my head as a short film. I might just try to do that. Thank you all for the comments. :)