It was really short and didn’t really go anywhere. Plus, did you really need to explain everything? I feel as though the story should be able to stand on it’s own.
They key is unnecessary as are many of the attributions (he said, he replied). Consider an edit where you use more of the 1024. Also, it seems like you are trying too hard with the unconventional names and references. They took me right out of the story.
Scrawler's Secret 
JC Tovil 
southsideof10