But what does he want with her? MORE REVENGE?

Maybe he wants to get his bone on! It’s a mystery!

I am not a huge western fan, but this is pretty great and I’m really enjoying the backwards prequel writing.

And, edit number one is complete.

I like it! It feels like part of an epic Western romance adventure.

Great story, but ‘worlds slip out’?? maybe the l was a slip as well??

Wow, nice catch Coomber, I honestly never noticed that typo! It’s fixed now.