I love it.
I love the rebirth.
Great concept about death and life.

Very nice read. Well written! Enjoyable.

Reincarnation, eh? An interesting tack. I always tend to read things silently, then aloud to see how it feels to speak and hear the words and this one was a pleasure.

The ‘languid paw’ bit confused me somewhat. Is the grandfather a sort of beast, or was it simply a creative way of describing his hand?

Love love love. This gave me goosebumps; your writing style is impeccable. Excellent work.

With age and arthritis his hand has indeed become a paw (in his eyes at least).