When I first started reading this story I thought to myself there should be dust. Then, ta-da, the dust appeared.

You describe the dream in a way that allows the reader to take the journey with you. I could see the room and the orange paint.

This is really amazing… going to be a tough choice. I really like the description.

5 outta 5 because I know this was really a dream, and a messed up one at that! But that’s where our inspiration comes from. Grats bro, nice transition form dream to paper!