I know how he feels about the collar.

As always, a great beginning. Moody and mysterious, leaving me wanting to find out more about her, him, where he’s come from and where they’re going to.

Beautifully described and a very interesting story given the “brainstormer” words. I’m not sure how the word ‘cubical’ plays into this though.

Thanks!

I will admit to slightly loose interpretation of ‘cubical’ and that I didn’t make it at all clear that they’re in a compartment on the train