I like how genuinely real this scene is. I could access it visually as if it were one of my own memories.

Ooh…. I was hoping for more than a “talk”… D:
But the visuals were good, and as Tad said, it was just very real.

hmm, racier.. yeah I shied away, chickened out.

Very nice! That final barrier of intimacy comes down at last…but was it the right decision? Maybe it’s a guy thing, but I think “We need to talk” are four of the most ominous words one can hear in a relationship.

that is the question, Devin, was it the right decision.. :)