Great point!

This seems preachy. Like you’re on a soap-box proclaiming to the masses the ways in which the world should be. Also, while you make valid points and arguments, there isn’t much here that hasn’t been said before in similar ways. Do I agree with these points? Certainly and wholeheartedly, but I can’t help but wish that there was something new/different about the delivery.

I don’t think this was preachy. It was an opinion that came directly from the mind of the author to the screen. southsideof10 wishes there was something new/different about said delivery. I believe there was no better way to express it.