Oh this is wonderful and creepy. I loved it!
Oh, very nice. Perfectly executed in more ways than one. Thank you for this entry!
The double surprise. While reading this I thought you got to the ‘death’ surprise too soon. But, when you revealed the wife to be the killer at the end it all fit together so nicely. Well done.
This is lovely.
You make me laugh
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