Comments on Does my skin scare you? by Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

ElshaHawk (LoA)

very well said! like the pushy, in your face challenge you present with each color.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Raphael Bane

Tis an amazing thing! This is bananas I love the last stanza!
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
ItsMeChristina

You’ve created a piece that has just enough issues being presented without sounding too “preachy”
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Thanks all
- Posted over 9 years ago.
Concerned Reader

A very nice poem, which I actually wasn’t expecting to get any of as submissions.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
{DARCH}Loa

Nice
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 4 out of 5
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Sorry but that’s not a constructive comment… If you leave a 4 at least elaborate…
- Posted over 9 years ago.
smdasilva {LoA}

I loved it. Makes one think.
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Tad Winslow

woo hoo! Feature, congrats, PJ. Your poem is playful (bling) but it maintains a serious tone. It got me thinking about racism and assumptions and the fear that waves in hatred’s intolerant wake. Atta dude!
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

Thanks much Tadalicious
- Posted over 9 years ago.
Abby (LoA)

This is great. It’s tinged with bitterness and delivers a strong, angry personality. A wonderful and imaginative theme line. Good rhyme scheme. I can’t find ANYTHING wrong =O…guess it has to be a 5
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- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5
Wednesday [PJ] ((LoA))

(I can find something wrong but there’s no way to correct it. 100 hypothetical points to who can spot it :P )
- Posted over 9 years ago.
Jim Stitzel

I don’t generally go in for poetry, but this really drew me in. Very engaging rhythm!
- Posted over 9 years ago.
- 5 out of 5