I like this perspective on the edge of the world. Very nice!

I love the narrative point of view and slang usage in this story. It’s a nice digital take on the edge of the world. It reminds me of old video where the game map just runs out.

Very enjoyable. Thanks for entering.

Thank you both for your comments. I appreciate the feedback. :)

This was really cool

Excellent story. I’m glad this won the challenge; it fits the theme so well.