With all due respect and genuine confusion, I ask:

wat

its okay, a female gets online late at night, finds a slight creeper, gets overwhelm and cuts it off…

I changed it around, it might be clearer now.

It’s like everyone who does online dating, but thank God she wasn’t like some others and went along with it.

so okay…

Should it be

*Can I get a hello?

DID YOU LIKE THE STORY… i don’t care about the little mistakes… YES OR NO… give me criticism, but then tell me if u like the damn story…

Short answer: no. It was okay, but I think the premise could have use a bit of extra work. I think it fell short of what you were trying to convey…

lol i had this experience last night. the premise is good (“people are wrong on the internet!”) but there’s a lotta grammar that inflames my OCD / grammar nazi syndrome

Started out well, but I soon lost interest. A little confusing at times, but you had aq good idea.

THANK YOU…I appreciated it, thats all I wanted… the grammar, yes is a little incorrect…but I wasn’t really focused on this story.