Wow! Lovely double meaning in the last sentence. Well done.

Very nice. :)

he knew too much. :)

For me, this is one of the best writings I’ve read of yours. The words flow nicely and because of that, the last line is such a shock. And a great interpretation of the challenge! I like this!

wow what an unexpected twist!

The title is so true. The last line is great…thriller.
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