Well played, sir. You could tell what was coming, but the path to get there was well executed and very enjoyable.

Haha. Like Jim Stitzel said, nicely played. It’s cool how you mostly used dialogue to get the story arc across, and I got a kick out of that last line. Thanks for entering!

I didn’t really catch the lines about her smelling his hands until I read it the second time. Kudos and welcome to Ficly :)

Nice. Clearly another woman was involved, but getting there through the hands was different.