First couple of sentences are incredible! I hope this is going to continue – i love this kind of fantasy. Great to see the Golem used for once. You have a great talent. Your description is AWESOME.
Abby
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Thanks! I feel like this is one of my stronger pieces of late. There’s definitely a fair chance that I’ll be continuing it, but I also wouldn’t mind if anyone else wants to take a stab at it. :)

Wow. Very cool. This a world worth revisiting again.

Thanks. I hope to eventually come back and develop it further.

I like the feel of this. Can’t wait to read more

Thanks! :)