Handful of typos: one-way glass; with him?; ‘well’ appears twice in the first sentence of the fourth paragraph; ‘mind set’ should be one word; ‘women like’ would read better as ‘feminine’; and ‘failers’ should be ‘failures’. Interesting continuation!
Handful of typos: one-way glass; with him?; ‘well’ appears twice in the first sentence of the fourth paragraph; ‘mind set’ should be one word; ‘women like’ would read better as ‘feminine’; and ‘failers’ should be ‘failures’.
Interesting continuation!
Jim Stitzel