Nice cliffhanger. I hope there’s more to come.

Interesting build-up. Curious to see where this goes from here.

Ooh, what’s going to happen next! Seriously, what?!

Anyway… this was, as always, very enjoyable Robert. The build-up to the last line was well worth it and I’m glad you took the time to set up for it. The little pig critter was a nice touch too :)

Thanks for entering!

Ooh, chilling ending. Sounds like you have a lot of back story worked out here…or you’re just really convincing at bluffing that you do.

I just jumped into this one without reading the previous ones. So far, the descriptions are vivid and sort of dreamlike, which I feel is what you’re going for. Going back to read the others now.