They act like deadly bullies at any school, but the white slipper gives me pause. Where are they? Very well done.

Really great dialog here. Very much my kind of story – and a style of writing that I complete associate with!

Great stuff…

a test at a facility, no you said institution.. and they get out sooner with higher scores.. and his was perfect.. yeah I read it, but I’m not getting the whole picture. Where are they? What is the meaning of their incarceration? I love the paragraph about being the outsider and going against the grain in the first ficly. It was very well-written!